Full Scale Mock-Up Second Critique

Here I made some changes to my mock-up design based on the notes from the class critique Yesterday. Today in class I had a talk with Caroline and we went through commented on the changes I had made from the first critique and also some more changes I could make to further improve my brochure.

Caroline liked the new addition of the sub heading on the Cover page

We also had a talk about my map, which at the moment we both agreed is looking a bit lacklustre and over-simplified. So I think I need to add a bit more to my map and give it a bit more detail without going overboard.

Caroline also liked my extra spread with different film locations, but again the map is lacking and needs improvement.





Another thing we talked about was the type layouts on my spreads. We talked about changing the bold body type on my spreads to the ragged right format as opposed to the justified margins I am currently using, as this will make the text easier to read and make the type flow a lot better.